Brain Freeze
gone away don't know where i'll be back don't know when left my keys my wallet my car keep them or not don't forget to feed the dog
gone away
don't know where
i'll be back
don't know when
left my keys
my wallet
my car
keep them
or not
don't forget to feed the dog
gone away...
you speak to me on this one…
very fine tuned piece.
well done.
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