I’m Outta Here
So long Mr. So and So
it’s time to move along.
I thought your lack of interest
to all your goings on.
I was naive in thinking
the few kind words we shared,
made you a human being
someone who I thought cared.
But we were never really friends,
I was blinded by your spell,
And so the shame’s on me my friend,
and you can go to hell!
sc2011
fun word flow…
Thanks for sharing………..
invite you to share 1 to 3 poems to Jingle Poetry potluck now.
first time participants can use old poems or poems unrelated to the theme.
free style commenting,
hope to see you share.
xxx
You have to love this one. We all feel this way with some relationship, just never say this as well.
seems like we have much in common…
wow….if you put it that way….luv it….like the message too…:-) thanks for sharing!!!
you brought your sentiments across very well! nice
OUCH! Hardhitting, and well put!
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Very nice go away Mr So and So!
Way to sock it to him =)
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Shelli you’re writing is fabulous and love your sense of humor…this would make a great Hallmark Card. Always look forward to seeing your new poems…can’t get enough. xxxooo
Shelli your writing is fabulous and love your sense of humor…this would make a great Hallmark Card. Always look forward to seeing your new poems…can’t get enough. xxxooo
Reminded me strongly of a recently broken up couple.. esp the pic associated with it..! well said.
Thank you all for your support, it means so much!